All Comments on 'And Jill Came Tumbling After'

The idea that a person being raped will enjoy it is unlikely. Second: the couple broke into their house, using codes obtained illegally, with unregistered firearms. The cameras he claimed to have would bear witness to that; however, they would be unnecessary. Between the semen, the weapons and the handcuffs, the couple would be caught and sent to jail. Of course, they could have just killed them and that would have been satisfactory as well.

Considering he humiliated Jack, what's stopping this hardened criminal from doing the same thing to another couple only worse? Or coming back for revenge?

Excellent storyline, well told in disciplined, unpretentious prose.

Having the home invaders be a man and a woman is an interesting twist. I found the scenario between Kevin and Jill very arousing. As usual, this author creates well written, thought provoking stories. More please!

Short sharp and well written,

Yes there are plot holes, but so bloody what.

It leaves things open for chapter 2

What happens next ?

BUT, Kevin and Laura's security is now a lot more in doubt than Jack and Jill's.

I love how you keep bringing back Laura and Kevin like this. Hope to see them in more inventive and erotic adventures. Thanx.

Please keep writing! So hot! My husband and I had amazing sex after reading this, so thank you! ;)

Loved it! I'm off to read the two preceding stories. Somehow missed them the first time around. Please keep writing.

I normally don't care for Nonconsent stories, but I sample a little of everything from time to time. I enjoyed this one, particularly the twist which reversed the roles.

..twist and role reversal. A very atypical home invasion.

Excellent non/con with a nice little twist at the end.

One thing I thought of (since I am just observing, so to speak). If they had taken their pictures and told the crooks that the pictures and the story would be placed in safekeeping (just as a little insurance) it might have been safe or it might have inspired more reprisal. Very good story. They might figure out stronger safety measures for the house.

without knowing who they are, where they live, no recourse. Personally I would see him or him and her dead and disappeared. Maybe keep her prisoner as a sex toy for a while..............

If you are implying that a woman can not become aroused or orgasm during non-consensual sex you are absolutely wrong. It doesn't happen a lot, but there are documented cases in which arousal and orgasm occurred. It is simply the body reacting to stimulus and does not mean that the woman "enjoyed" the attack.

Since both woman would test positive for non-spousal semen and no bruising or tearing exists then it is a "he said she said" situation as far as a rape charge goes in either direction. Since they all pretty much touched the handcuffs their admissibility as evidence might be excluded by a good defense lawyer. However, Jack is wrong about the illegal weapons, as a simple check of the magazines could prove that only his and/or Jill's finger prints are on the ammunition held within them and/or if they have ammo from the same lots at their house/base (US and most other ammunition manufacturers keep lot numbers--which are imprinted on the boxes/cases--and records to track them--by federal law). The fact that Jack had a key to their house in his pocket would also be problematic for him as well as the possibility that he or Jill would most likely have the entry code written on paper or on a smart phone. So, breaking and entering, unlawful detention (simply by virtue of the firearms--no need for the handcuffs), criminal threatening, attempted armed robbery would most likely put both Jack and Jill in the pokey for quite a bit.

How much of a tosser you have to be!!! The wife gets raped and he gets a stiffie??!! How brain sick or pervert are you??!!

Good plot, well written.

A friend recommended that I read your work. I recently read and commented on 'After Midnight.' Your ability to switch gears and write this sort of story is amazing. I'm normally not turned on by rape scenarios, but this one got to me in a hurry. I love the twist at the end that leveled the playing field. Can't wait to read the rest of your stories. Gonna have my husband read them too!