All Comments on 'And Ophelia Blinked'

Probably something wrong with me that I found this as hot as I did. Of course the darkest interpretation is that Cam turned Ophelia's like of the main character to hate and so she's being punished for something out of her control.

This was a well written story but I honestly feel like Ophelia was the victim of 2 mind controllers.

Well at least it was obvious that none of the 3 characters were even decent people. None of them gave a crap about anyone but themselves and if the story followed true then within a year, 2 of the 3 would be dead.

Whoever hurt you, I'm sorry. But you know, you turned it into art.

Randy is a twisted coward. He should have gone after Cam who messed up the friendship he did have with Ophelia. Story pissed me off, maybe your intent, but such evil was projected on the victim. You should have messed with Cam so he couldn't destroy more helpless women, but of course a true coward always goes after the weakest and Randy ws no better than Cam, maybe even worst! Could have made this an amazing story of courage. Vengeance just plain sucks all the time. I like your other work but this one made me sick. I understand that is my issue sorry for my rant!!