by Bandit1
Well done. You kept it interesting with enough buildup. I will be looking for more!
I really like your style of writing. I also could relate to many of the charactoristics of the story. I was thinking does this person know me. I am a redhead and my husband is Michael. And I am chatty and he can be a bit of an ass lol. I love the humor and romance as well.
This is a fantastic story. I would love to read what happens next.
Kind of slow on the start. But get real hot in ch2 and 3. Hope to see a lot moor of your work soon. And sister make three.Keep it up lol mine was up at the end.
Very well written and erotic...well done
One point though...allahna Myles sung "black velvet" not allanis morrisette :oÞ
AWESOME I love ur work keep it coming and keep pushing the boundaries.
I've read a lot on here, and this easily exceeded my expectations. A brat who is bi, an exhibitionist, and enjoys anal and incest in a trio with sis's hubby?!?! Plus both are redheads!! I don't see how it gets any better than that. This story ticked a lot of boxes of my fav's.