by lord_jefe
You put into words what I never can. Your stories are totally tuned into my own deep desires. Love them.
EHHHHHHH, not very good - the end had him do a 180 in his attitude in like 2 sentences.
This is a beautiful piece. Sexual, yes. Overtly so? No. But delicious and tantalizing, all the same! Leaves me wanting more...more sex, more intrigue, and more back story! What this literature does not lack is heart. Humanity, love, lust, and passion all mixed together in a way to suggest the author is familiar with heartbreak but is taking tentative steps into the darker underworld of bondage in a desperate attempt to understand what he missed the first time. But crossing this threshold may be his salvation or his ruin!
really well written lord_jefe, good character descriptions and build up - just wish it had gone a little longer than 1 paragraph of sex. hope you follow it up with a more detailed adventure of the two of them.
I can't find just the right anal story to read. Oh, the "steel" thing he was strapped to needs better description. I can't picture it.