All Comments on 'And the Third Brought Fire Pt. 02'

Very interesting story. At times it is hard to wrap my head around it but still it is full of visuals and if it was a movie, I see it as a cross between "Blade Runner" and "The Book of Eli" with a bit of "I, Robot" thrown in.

Looking forward to more of this story. 5 Stars

Enterprise here Arizona in another lit story. All we need now is a ghost of Toby Keith story. Hehe.... ',Merica

Spends so much time trying to have this odd, unexplained backstory, that nothing actually makes sense.

My only regret is that the stars system doesn't go above 5.

I tried. I usually like your stories so I really tried to like it. It is too cyberpunk meets acid dream.

Which is odd, since it's clearly steampunk