by espeteroh
This story reads like an episode of “The Twilight Zone”. And that’s not a bad thing. I liked it, although I thought the ending was rushed.
English! Not Canadian!
Nonplussed means so surprised and confused that one is unsure how to react.
"Henry looked completely nonplussed"
i thought there might be a twist to the story when i was half the story, and thought of different scenarios, but tis one, i didn't think of. that's why i got goosebumps up my arms when i finished reading it.
but then ghost stories often are.
the only weakness is that this story seem low on emotion, esp the passion, for me.