All Comments on 'Angel'

Like all of your stories, I couldn't put it down.

I thought this story was really good, but long.

Nice work ZephR, loved the story. It's great to see that your passion really lies in good story telling (and I mean good) rather than getting too carried away with meaningless erotica. To me, such engaging subject matter and somewhat controversial themes deserve to be explored with this kind of interest by people with a good mind for the ironic, much like yourself.

Please continue.

I couldn't help laughing at times. You have a great way with words.

That is one of the best mixes of erotica and fantasy I have ever had the pleasure of reading. Well visualized and organized..tantalizing and appealing

Two angels had the power to knock out the "prince of darkness"? The being who waged war against God is that weak? Dunno sounded a bit off to me and subsequently ruined the whole story for me.