by thechrysalids
This is brilliant. It reads like a television show. I love it. Please write more, quickly. Love the Russian words and Ivan and Angelica are so good together. Opposites definitely attract.
Way to short but still a sweet carry over the first chapter. Please continue to write and develop a strong connection between the two. When will this guy reveal his past? I think Angel deserves to know.
Where is the rest of the story? Hate starting something new and then not get an ending
I'm just gonna post here to let people know I'm returning to writing! I'll be reworking angel from the beginning and will be posting here and on wattpad under kechiwrites ☺️ I'm so sorry for the 4 year hiatus!! But I'm back and I appreciate all your feedback