by Gweall
But I still am smiling by the end. This is a bizarre yet fun story. Can't wait until the next chapter!!!
Only a person with great imagination like you can come up with such an interchanged version of what is normally the common knowledge and get away with it without confusing their readers. Wonderful...looking forward to the next posting.
You have quite an imagination to come up with this and have us intrigued as to the dynamics of the afterlife....
Not only is it amazing but you've managed to give literotica a story that's both sexy and full of plot!