All Comments on 'Angel of Desire'

Hello! This is my baby, I've been wanting to write this story for years and just never got around to it. Please leave constructive critisim, I want to improve my writing, not get disheartened!

I like the whole premiss of the story. So the missing father is a knight from the wrong side of good. And we also know that the tracker has just found the most beautiful and sensual woman no wait that's only part true because the woman is in fact the demon child he was sent to capture/kill! Great plot! I can't wait for more. .....go now....stop reading comments.......write more now...hehe-he....

Keep up the good work please.

I love it! Please update soon :)

Love the history you started with and the plot. Please update!

PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE :D

If you liked this one, there is more cumming. ;-)

As a fan of "Poor Fellow-Soldiers of Christ and of the Temple of Solomon" read Knights Templar your history was good and the story interesting. As a student I assume you know that fairly recently old original scrolls of the Knights Templar confessions and trials were discovered in the Vatican and after a careful review the Pope declared the Knights Templar innocent of all charges.

Off to read the next chapters. Thank you.

Mike

Great story. I like how you focus on the plot as well as the “other stuff”.

I’m hoping you update this soon.