All Comments on 'Angela's Sexual Adventures Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Mmmmm.....sooo good!!!

Part two PLEASE!

SubmissiveVirginSlutSubmissiveVirginSlutover 19 years ago
So many fantasies in one

Catholic school girl, daddy, anal. Love it all. Please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Not finished

Sorry, but as far as I'm concerned it's just a preface.Where's the body....the real content that it leads up to??

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Get real

This isn't a story. It's just a quick fix for bored teenagers. Absolutely no plot, no drama, no suspense, no dialogue. Somebody tell this person that in English it isn't necessary to capitalize common nouns.

Practice at home before you submit any more. And get an editor. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
NO WAY

5"3" tall weighs 97 lb. and has 36DD breasts That is right up there with the 16 year old with a 13 inch member. Just not believable.

HornyViginAngelHornyViginAngelover 5 years ago
Has potential.

All she needs is to have experience with an uncle since daddy is too busy haveng the help. Let him watch all of her virginities be gone. Lwt him become jealous of another man taking what should be his. Also be more realistic with the size of her endowment s and weight.

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