All Comments on 'Angeline Ch. 01'

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LKinkoLKinkoover 19 years ago
Great Start!

Definitely looking forward to the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
WOW!

I almost came with her! When is the next chapter?

English LadyEnglish Ladyover 19 years ago
Well written,..

A wonderful opening though "it was all a dream" seems a little jaded :) It is a good beginning and I can see an interesting story coming from it :)

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