All Comments on 'Angel's Call Ch. 02'

Like it, hope you keep going.

Thank goodness! They were only negative in the first

chapter and here could have been fatal. Hope that you

clear up some of the mysteries along the road!

I'm enjoying this story and looking forward to the next chapter.

very good story with interesting possibilities for further development. Keep it up and don't wait long with the rest of the story. G.Belgium

Good story just keep writing. Very interesting.

He's a really good man and so sweet with the baby. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

But the story could use some editing to make the writing tighter. I don't mean grammar; you skip around like you are in a hurry, and use dialog to move the story too much. Some more non-dialog descriptions and narration would make the story flow better.