by ImmortalRomance
I have never rated a story before until today. I just gave you five stars on a wonderful story. I really hope you continue this, or do something with it because I really like it.
This story reminds of Snapp one of my favorite tv shows
Jack my emotions around, will you? Powerful and well done; but all too short, even as just a first chapter. Then again, you did leave me wanting more.