All Comments on 'Angie and the New Pool'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Where did Patty disappear too??

It was a good story anyhow the faulty light was a good gimick.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
A one pager normally doesn't

Get a good vote however you spun a good story quickly and very effectively. Try two pages next time and take some time for the husband to think about what was happening to his wife...

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