All Comments on 'Angry Sex'

You have captured the kind of moment most of us experience - although perhaps not in the rain - very nicely. I see that you have submitted only one other piece of work. I'm sure more of your writing would be well received.

Honestly I just orgasmed to that awesome piece of writing... :3

Ooooohhhhh yes... Thanks im really horny now :P

ditto the other commenters. sexy writing, captures the passion ;)

why in the dirt tho. hope they were married