All Comments on 'Ani & Lars Ch. 03'

If you're going to have a French character in a story, try and have her speak correctly. Noone expects you to do long speeches in perfect grammar, but it would at least be nice if Colette didn't talk to Ani as if Ani is a man. Kind of ruins the romantic moment (or suggests some twist that hasn't been made clear yet???).

Colette should say to Ani: Ma cherie

Colette to Lars: Mon cheri

I will fix this in a future edit.

Thanks for letting me know.

Really well written and the sex is hot. I look forward to more installments