All Comments on 'Animal Instincts Ch. 02'

by Keme

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hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyover 13 years ago

Ohhh so hot, I can't wait for the next chapter.

me71me71over 13 years ago
Names?

Great chapter. The only down side was you mixed up a couple of names. I think you used Brooke for Chloe twice and Nathan instead of Jackson once. All in all was a great read. Very intense sex scene that leaves your heart racing and your breath panting, unable to wait for the next round.

lildragonlildragonover 13 years ago
Wow

Skye wasn't the only one who forgot to breathe! That was awesome.

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 13 years ago
Nice work.

We met a lot of characters this chapter and it will take me a while to get them straight. But I'm liking the pairings and looking forward to seeing how they develop.

EdwarusEdwarusover 13 years ago
:(

agh cliffhanger but gotta love it and the story's great

mokkelkemokkelkeover 13 years ago

they can't complain the chapter is too short now! loved it and it's only getting better.

i like how james is using his ability yet no abusing it with her.

he's a lost cause hihi

on to the next!

SwtBBW_WFLSwtBBW_WFLover 10 years ago
Loved it....

Can't wait for more.....Sexy and Hot!

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