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Click here"The person that comes to the door with my things will also be a werewolf. I'm not completely certain who it will be, but you must not show fear. They will not be here long."
"Um. Oh. How many eggs?"
He smiles at her. "Half a dozen, if there are enough. Sunny side up."
She opens the carton. "Uh, yeah, there are." She starts cracking eggs. "So, OK, there's a guy in charge who isn't you. So, who are you?"
"I'm Beta of the pack."
"What's Beta?"
"Second in command. I carry out our Alpha's commands and take over much of the day to day duties."
"Such as?" She sets the plates on the table.
"Maintaining the house and grounds, keeping track of food and supplies, upkeep of vehicles, training lower ranks."
"Coffee?"
"Oh, god, yes."
She laughs and pours him a cup. The toast pops up and she brings over two slices, slides two more in, and sits.
"Emmett?"
"Hmm?" around a piece of bacon.
"How did I guess your name?"
He hesitates briefly and she looks at him. "We have some limited telepathic ability. When you started thinking about a name for me I just concentrated on it. You picked up on it. So much better than boy or Rex."
Her eyes widen. "Can you read my mind?"
He looks distant, as if listening to something far away. He shoots to his feet, knocking the chair over.
"Emmett? What's wrong?"
His voice is breathless. "The Alphas... They're coming."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 8 years agoI only saw 6 chapters of this story first, and I was thinking, "Here we go again. Waiting weeks for the next chapter." Then I saw chapter 11 and I was like YEAAAHH!!! I love this story. I love the sex, and I love how there is an actually story that... sort of makes sense, other than the bit about the werewolf bit. You are an excellent writer. KEEP GOING.
Lovingwriter22over 12 years agobut can Ronnie just fucking die already?!? really bastard gna call animal control? way to go man oh and while your at it can you grow a vagina and act like more of a flaming bitch!
sorry just had to get that off my chest!
on another note: Fantastic story! loving it so far(:
Ayamiover 13 years agoim glad u dont wait to long between them to write the next one, cant wait to read wat happened, great read
nienierover 13 years agoThis was an awesome update this story is an awesome story.
I can't wait to see what happens when the Alphas get there.
I want Ronnie ass to take a nose dive off a cliff.
Thank you for sharing
Happy Writing!
donaldeover 13 years agoi really did enjoy this chapter in a way wish Emmett had just ate Ronnie but i have a feeling he aint done with him yet
QueenCottonCandyover 13 years agoI just read this story, all six chapters so far and I love it.
Can't wait to read more. I do hope there are many more to
come. The longer the better.
Atawaheover 13 years agoVery nice pacing to the story. this could easily get to be one of my "check daily for new chapters" stories. Eagerly awaiting the next installment.
cinnamon_kisses12over 13 years agoI'm glad you answered that 'naming' question I was curious about. Great chapter. I hope Ronnie gets arrested!
Zodia195over 13 years agoI am really enjoying this now. Like someone said already I am wondering if the Alphas are Emmett's parents. I am worried about both animal control and the police though.
willieoneover 13 years agoI think the Alpha's are his parents. They have been worried about him and want to see for themselves he is ok as they would have been told about the were he killed at the start of this story and had not heard from him. I love the way Em came downstairs as if it was a normal everyday event for them. LOL The poor love still hasn't had a chance to tell her she is his mate. Please don't wait to long between chapters and post the next one NOW!!!!
bearmad1963over 13 years agoI love this story very much and cannot wait to see what happens in the next chapter.
Pleae post it soon.
HAPPY NEW YEAR 2011
Ladeesageover 13 years agoI love what you've got going on so far! I keep looking for the next chapter. If you'll let me, I'd like to make a friendly critique. In your writing, you keep switching tenses. You started by using past tense verbs (ran, went, came, etc.) and hopped to using present tense verbs (curls, reaches, claws, etc.). Consistency would make the story a bit easier to read. Can't wait to see what happens when Emmett's Alphas show up. Thanks.
canndover 13 years agoI really enjoyed this chapter. You used the attack by Ronnie to smoothly have her accept him as a man. The scene between them was really nicely done. I like that you explained how she knew his name since I had asked about that. I was surprised to find out he was a Beta and I like surprises. And the cliffhanger is great! Wonder how it will go...I hope she's not at too much of a disadvantage still not knowing much of anything about the pack and him. I liked the fact that they had this subtle telepathy connection. That was a good idea and different than the typical were story that establishes the connection when they mate. I like when stuff is changed up a bit. I liked this chapter alot. Hope for more soon!
cantfightfateover 13 years agounsure of the first few chapters but you seem to be hitting your stride. Things are getting interesting. Keep up the good work!
