All Comments on 'Anita & Me: A Story'

This is an incredible love story. Thank you.

Now, please get back and finish it. If you can't think of how, read Patricia51's Serve and Protect series. You have a great talent for telling about interesting people who love. Please continue to share it with us.

A great love story.... no more need sto be said!

Excellent story line and character development. I enjoy stories that have a lot of thought and feelings attached to them. This was truly a story about love and the emotions that are attached with "falling in love". I look forward to reading more of your writings.

The character development coupled with the introspective thoughts made the one of the most complex and enjoyable stories I've yet read on Lit. A very good look at how appearance and personal situations at an early age can affect people's later lives. Add in a happy ending, and you have a top quality story in my opinion.

Kydreamer

Fantastic words, depth of character and emotion. The positional pondering was exceptional. However, he seems overwelmed and uncertain. Minipulated or not. Somewhat wary and uncomfortable of her direction and assertion over his comfort level. A great work in itself but begging resolution. I suspect major pitfalls as she emerges resulting in no marriage or a failed marriage unless he alters his principles or attitude measurably. Thanks and Regards

The character developement on this story is fantastic. The damage we sustain in our youth colors and affects nearly every aspect of our lives for the rest of our lives. You have shown that to perfection with this story and also how the right person can slowly help to stop the internal emotional bleeding. I look forward to the next part of the story and the conclusion of their happiness. I hope it is a conclusion and not an ending anyway. ;p

I've been reading stories on this site for about a year and this is by far the best I've read here!

The writer obviously didn't take his meds before writing this garbage. The worst. "1*" !!

An excrement of a diseased mind. "1*" !

I loved every word of it. A classic.

Nuf said. 1* !

Good story...who found it a bad one, should look himself in a mirror and cry for being so stupid...

Strange. I guess that’s about all I can say about this story. It was strange.

Strange seems to cover it pretty well. Author seems to be trying t write a literary piece on a porn site. Just comes off cheesy.

And so the author wrote a story that reached out to all of us, to all of us who were disfigured, who were passed over, who were ignored, who were petrified shy, and some of us cursed him and some of us praised him, but all of us knew exactly what he had done.

LWlurker