All Comments on 'Anita's Affair Pt. 03'

But it ends with a whimper.

Tom and Anita were lying poolside when his burner phone vibrated to show he had a message. "Ready for another drink?" He asked his wife.

Tom ducked behind some plants and checked the message. "It has been done." is all it said. He was grinning from ear to ear when he returned.

You see Anita didn't know the vacation was also an alibi for when two of Tom's friends paid her former lover a visit. These fine gentlemen beat the living shit out of him then, just to be bastards, castrated him.

Tome regained his manhood. And almost everyone lived happily everafter.

As always, I notice the harshest critics are either Anon or have never submitted a story themselves.

This is a wonderful story that accounts for human frailties. If you don't like the ending ask the author for permission to write an alternative sequel and read what the anons and know-nothing critics have to say.

The poor pathetic wretches that never leave a positive comments may kill Literotica. The people that post their stories are not paid except for the encouraging and constructive comments. "This story is crap" is not constructive and at best incredibly rude.

There is no subscription fee on this site like others so if you don't like a story, write a better one and see how the critics like it.

Really?

Someone questioned the plausibility of this story but that's exactly what I found attractive about it. As satisfying as they may be, stories with revenge elements are more implausible because real life is emotional; we are molded by our histories and being in love requires weakness and trust, the very opposite emotions that drive revenge. The "heroes" of the revenge stories can't also be loving, caring husbands but have to be people who hold themselves in check from a deep relationship. I speak from a 50 year loving relationship with the same woman. Despite this I enjoy the BTB stories, kind of like fairy tales.....

That was dull boring and a let down. What happened ? I didn't think a btb was called for but a divorce was .She had sex over and over in her marriage bed she did not love her husband. She loved herself and only cared for herself.Everything after the breakup was self pity ,I know spouses can forgive anything but this was to much.

All the men that are bleating about this story are obviously real tough guys.

You are obviously not one to show emotion or to have a bit of compassion, well yes she did wrong and all that bullshit mumbo jumbo about her medical problems is just that, she cheated. HOWEVER when someone has that much guilt to attempt suicide it does go a long way to prove her disgust with herself, but I am sure the tough guys think that it woud have been better if she succeeded. Didn't see anything wrong with the ending, didn't give it 5* for other reasons but a solid 4 from me.

MY ex wife cheated on me 6 months b4 I got married and did not dump her because I didn't realise she had gone the whole way with him and I buried it until I heard that he had been boasting. Spent the next 12 years getting my revenge, complete waste of those years.

JJ

I’m sorry, but I can’t buy all this “I love him/her more than live itself” crap!

Read my lips: YOU DO NOT CHEAT ON SOMEONE YOU LOVE, PERIOD!

I also don’t believe you should forgive someone just because you love them. In the case of the story here, although he hasn’t confronted her, she KNOWS that he knows, she should be throwing herself at his feet and risk the consequences. How can he possibly forgive her if she won’t ask for his forgiveness?

She gave him a fucking garage remote! That’s not one moment of passion remembering Prom Night!

I think I said this in one of the other parts and similar stories: Why the FUCK can't these women end the affair with a phone call, text or Email? No, they just HAVE to do it face-to-face, and of COURSE they are then completely incapable of resisting this man that they DON'T love, and betray the husband that they love "more than life itself!" It's ridiculous!

It doesn't have to turn to a "burn the bitch" situation but for him to drag it for so long without raising the issue for discussion... is just ridiculous. A maytar complex. Plus, so that she shared the same pain issues he felt he should have told her he would see some women for 5 months! Only then, if she could accept that, would they get together as a real couple again. Yes, I know that scenario is also ridiculous but... to do NOTHING! Unbelievable.

No way to get to this ending from the beginning.

Weak ending, did you give up?

Strange, usually I really enjoy and find entertaining a SteveLee story. Or conversely I find SteveLee disturbing and disgusting. Either way reading SteveLee1146 is never boring and mundane. Until I got to this "Anita's Affair Pt.03 " .

What happened ? I got to the end of the story and felt nothing much. All the energy and passionate feelings dissipate to nothing. Ho hum they reconciled, so what, who cares, on to a different story.

SteveLee1146, I believe using Char to 'explain' in the last chapter took all the emotional energy right out of this story ,it went to sleep💤.

Gave you 2*s for this, but I definitely will look out for the next story you write. It will be more interesting, entertaining, and emotional than this one🎭, lol!

AMerryman

Just no ! It was too weak in character development, had holes everywhere is the narrative and the conversational language was stilted and unconvincing.

In order for a reader to care they need to be invested in the characters and all three of your main characters here were just too unrealistic as real people to sell that to readers.

there are a many of couples out there that fit this to a tee.. great presentation of a discombobulated relationship... thank you 4

cuck shit.

She made little tom a cuckold & a big big Wimp!

I liked it, but it has some weak points. One was the reason for her cheating: she loved to keep secrets from her father...But I'm sure those secrets were all different...For instance, one day she had smoked, another day some other thing. In this case she had always the same secret: She cheated for 5 months, in her own house and own marital bed...she even slept with the lover all nigh...Another was that in no way they would surpass their problems as simply as that: for sure they would need a lot of counselling...Finally, how in hell could he be sure that she was cured and never again would fell in her giggling secrets? However a good read...3*

Tried to like the tale but can't. The guy says he can get over her being penetrated by the asshole, as long as he has her love. Really! If I were cheated on, I could never get the sex thoughts out of my head. Being told that I meant more to her than life itself ( why do people say this and yet cheat?) would be the least of my concerns.

At best, his wife is a selfish woman who never cared for anything except her own ego. At worst, and much more likely - she is a mentally disturbed, selfish woman who never cared for anything except her own ego. My experience tells me that she will NEVER get better and as bad as she is as a wife, she would be 1,000 times worse as a mother. This is important because this is the whole point of marriage - offspring. When you marry, you do not just get a live in girlfriend/fuckbuddy. You are partnering with your future co-parent as well. You will do a lot more parenting in your marriage than fucking, and going on romantic get-aways. You will either be proud of your co parent or ashamed. A mentally ill, selfish woman who never cared for anything except her own ego will never make you proud of her as a mother. In fact she will likely injure the children with her selfishness by cheating and breaking up the family or simply torturing all involved over the course of 18-25 years! (This will not be good for her either! She will be miserable as she becomes the monster that she is inside.) Like so many cases of cheating - it isn't about revenge, it isn't about anger, it is about common sense and not making things worse than they are, not having a horrible life, not bringing children into a marriage that has already been identified as fucked up. It is about doing the right thing for all involved and divorcing the mentally disturbed, selfish woman who never cared for anything except her own ego. (By the way, do authors write stories like this to troll the audience or do they think that cuckoldry and mental illness are somehow romantic and erotic? Do these people have any life experience? Can they think a few steps into the future? I am baffled by this!)

I have nothing against reconciliation, but this one is too forced. I hate reconciliation stort where the parter that was hurt was given by the author no standards which in turn allowed the cheater to be forgiven.

There's no attempt by the cheater to redeem herself. And yes trying to herself or disappearing is not an act of redemption, that's escapism. The secondary character is too high and mighty while displaying her hypocricy (and she admitted it).

There is also no attempt to resolve the root issue or any attempt to assure the husband that it will never happen again. It's like going back to square one, no lesson learned, no growth, no insights gained.

I was hoping during part 2 that the author would pull a dramatic reconciliation (i knew it was reconciliation in part 2). When the wife said she will give the husband room, i thought part 3 will be about self reflection and reforging the relationship (not necessarily marriage). But somehow the reconciliation was magically waved in by making the husband spineless.

To the negative posers out there....get over your selves. This was a good fantasy story and close to real life situation's. I do believe that there are those who can be seduced if the situation is presented just right. Not for most maybe but it does happen just that way very often. So over all 4* keep writing.

Yeah, like usual woman always get so much excuses and Cher was bad too she divorce her husband for cheating but helps and excuses Anita in everything, why didn't she gave her husband another chance if she can help Anita.

I'm a sucker for happy endings, I loved it.

There are no words to describe what I feel about myself for actually reading this last chapter.

Stupid , stupid , stupid are the closest ones I can think of right now.

Well , won't make that mistake again , SteveLee1146 is seared in my brain now as the RAAC champion , and to avoid any future works as if they carried Ebola.

to real life situations than some of the navy seal/well connected/ tiddlywink black belt testicle crushing back alley scenarios that are so beloved of the scorched earth policy immature groupies of this genre.

Char divorced her husband because he cheated, but when Anita cheats every excuse is made for it to be forgivable? Char pushes for reconciliation when she couldn't do it herself? I highly doubt Anita would accept those same reasons and forgive if Tom cheated.