All Comments on 'Anita's Breastfeeding'

by vatsalya

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 15 years ago
story is a little choppy and a little hard to read

A good story line and concept. Smooth out the dialogue and that would let the story flow better. Thanks....Rich

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
learn better English

your English is very poor, making the story too difficult to read

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Yet another crap

Does this dude know anything about sex, or male and female orgasms, or anthing related., he just shows how pity his state is, but yes is an expert in piracy. hehehe

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

oh its exciting

26thNC26thNCalmost 5 years ago
Incest lactation

That makes for a really great LW story doesn't it.

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