by steelring
Wow. A lot more creative than you normally do. But well written. Managed to highlight the "supportive" but uninterested husband and the manipulating wife wanting to do things that she knew her husband would not allow if told upfront. Lieing by omission. Many thanks. I enjoyed the story. Cheers.
I dunno, I think a caning for real in front of the crowd instead of the simulated one by Charlie Chaplin might be appropriate given the level of deception she engaged in :-)
Excellent, creative, and imaginative, and the writing was superior. The plot was out of this world (pun intended).
Your descriptions of the characters and their actions were superb
Creative, imaginative, and a different plot with realistic characters and vivid detail. The story itself is weird, but it is so well written that it doesn't matter. The show after the show was fun to read and imagine. Leaving the relationship between ann and mark added suspense and tension to the story. This was probably disconcerting to many readers but to leave one's audience is a literary way to end the story. A sequel?
Excellent novel. Unusually good language and very reflective
Best thing ive read here in a while!