All Comments on 'Annie Cummings Ch. 01'

liked the fun-loving, "go for it" vibe. keep it up!

I think you might have missed one or two cliches.good story but way too many unimaginative phrases made it sound like a cheap paperback

This seems like a cross between humour and stroke material with neither really working, I'm afraid. Needs an injection of originality or something. It's just a little 'by the numbers'. It's okay though '4'.

I could have used more oral action, if this girl truly loves to suck cock, give us more of that, you've got a good thing started, just roll with it.