by annielock
WTF is this rubbish? This is not erotic, and the tormentors should go to jail.
This is vicious without being more than incidentally erotic. Highly repetitive, it's the same sort of thing over and over. Two stars.
ANNIES TORMENT#2 great story the more bondage and pain in a story the better i like per haps you could write a story about friends being enslaved and sold
dont listen to anyone else but me when i say i love this story soo much im so glad to see you continued with it. keep up the good work im the one who commented on your first part of this story..cant wait to see what happens next
Cannot believe this was written by a female. Sickest stories I have ever read, the author needs a dose of her own medicine. Take your sick mind elsewhere.
2 late for help 4 u little sick one - take your infected mind elsewhere.
Bring the author (?) back to the asylum where his (her?) place is!
What a couple of sick brains to write this and to call it beautiful=