All Comments on 'Anniversary Date Night'

Great story! I would hope that you both enjoyed other events such as this later in your married life. Always a good thing to spice up a marriage.

You asked for a comment. Boring is the best adjective. Short vignettes need to have some punch, some surprise, but there was nothing here. There was no story, no drama, no dialog.

Loved this story. Good fun play

Maybe a 4 if in Exhibitionist category even if was his wifw

Nice short story, thanks for writing.

Loved Top of the Town! Went their after homecoming or junior proms with dates!

Great story of a fun loving couple.

When you coming to a restaurant near me ?

Great anniversary gift, fucking in a car. You have to be a teenager, and a virgin, to think fucking in a car has ANY benefits over a more comfortable and private setting. Punk.

Not sure I get intentionally showing off my wife's 'goodies' to strangers, as it's a bit too crazy in the world today, and you never know who might want to try to do what...

...but the story was OK for what it was.

Just another story about some weak husband showing off his wife’s assets. Oh hum, nothing new. 3*s.

Love seeing a glimpse of a naked breast with an exposed nipple. Good work, well-written story. 5 stars for you.

Enjoyable story!

4

Nope wife's definitely a whore and is cheating, husband is a honorless coward with no self-respect, and they wouldn't last another year because in reality 90% of marriages that try swinging, swapping, sharing, or an open marriage fail they are a death sentence and more often than not turn love into hate.

Flat story line, lacking imagination and inspiration. A writer who's ideas seem to be running out.

Great story - very erotic and well written. MC is one lucky hubby! They both enjoyed the teasing and had a great anniversary! Can’t understand the negative comments. Author is entitled to write and the negative trolls should try to write themselves. It ain’t easy!