by BobWrongerer
Good is some parts pathetic in others, I did read it through but was somewhat disappointed with the story not particularly the author
Wow! Sorry, I didn’t really understand why you wrote this- 2 stars for effort.
His treat Kent of her was over the top.Also where did she get the money for the fleapit?.No matter how cheap it still as to be paid for.What did he do with the money he took off Sam?.
0 stars - you lost me when the moron husband started to make conditions to allow the slut to fuck another man.
His first condition should have been DIVORCE. Then she could do whatever to whomever all day long.
He would no longer care, as he would be too busy finding his next fuckbuddy - because we all know 'once stung twice shy' and he will smart enough to never marry again.
That was funny, I do prefer the btb endings but still that was a funny story.
As far fetched as it was, this story was well written, and somewhat enjoyable. A solid 4. Thanks. I don't have the creativity.
5 stars. Goid story, with no hint of reality. (What fantasy does?) FICTION. BTB and RAAC at the same time. Good job!👍
Bob Wrongerer.
You must subscribe to the saying-
Rules are Just Guidelines.
Actually I think you broke your own Guidelines.
Great Story You got a 5 from ME -- I'm also called
Bob---- I've Made tough decisions most of my career.
I've also to said many times. "Rules are Just Guidelines"
Woe, woe, and thrice woe! Doomed! doomed! We're all doomed! The end of the World is nigh! Woe, woe, and thrice woe!
With apologies to Bill Spokeshave.
Cuck loving story. If this tale was real, their marriage is finished, if not now a little down the track, trust and jealousy will see to that.
Anyways, Cuck drivel always gets 1/5
Not bad, and very creative. The thing is, bob went to a lot of trouble, setting up Sam and Sally. For him to even be able to ask her what she wanted, after Sam’s death, is a big stretch. Taking her back?
I’m not demanding realism, just a sliver of believability.
Well I think you meant "insipid", but when you post crazy stuff, you get crazy comments.
This story ust sucked. That is all i can say. He really wanted toget back with that shit whore. He shouldturn in his man card. Trade it for a sorry ass piece of shitcard.
Thanks, realizing it is fiction I enjoyed this tremendously. Admittedly, the tire iron part features quite high in my opinion but I guess that is just the way I'm wired.
Interestingly, I found the maybe/kinda/possibly reconciliating part more believable than the parts I enjoyed. People do messed-up shit to themselves all the time for the weirdest reasons.
WTF....THIS MC IS JUST A WEAK WIMP CRYBABY CUCK!! He is a fucking pussy!!
CUCK WRITER
This story is maggot gagging!!! I have NO respect for Bob. The best thing that pussy could do is DIE!!! Damn, this is just several pages of puck!!! I wish i could give it less than a zero.
BOB IS A FUCKING CUCK...EVEN MEETING SAM....HE SHOULD KILL HIMSELF. HIS WIFE IS A WHORE AND HE HAD NO BALLS TO BTB.
The same commenters who believe that NCIS, CSI, Wrestle Mania, and politics are real are the same deluded idiots who lose their (small) minds over a made-up, tongue-in-cheek, cheatin' wife story on a FREE erotic story website. The really scary thing is that they can vote.
No, nope, not happy, absolutely not. Wronger put a lot of words to paper but ended up horseshit.
10 Big Blazing stars for Bob! LOL, This was such a Great Read, I almost died laughing. Handcuffing Sam with some strange handcuffs with NO key, Sam had to walk naked to the police car, with his but crack showing! Ha ha ha LOL now that was funny. I was hoping Bob would shoot the bastard's dick off, with the rock salt, but he lost it in the end anyway. LOL, These asshat complainers just skim stories and miss all the good stuff. Just delete their stupid complaints. If you don't know how text me, and I will let you know. What a burn on Sam! Now on the wife, Sally. Truthfully, they are all sluts, and can't really trust any of them. So, maybe hanging on to Sally was the right thing. Thanks, Buster2U
Average LW story. Wife throws gernade into the marriage and, in the end, husband decides to give her another chance. A good ending? A reasonable ending? An unlikely ending given the facts of the story? Author's chice. I just disagreed with it.
A story that was, about halfway realistic, for once. The details got slightly derailed, but his reaction was more like real life. 4 Stars
a lost of common sense and a husband who was too giving.shit for brain wife with a shot from a slut ray.writer make husband look weak and wimpy.
maybe not completely true to real life,but ... messy,complicated,a lot like real life . if life was easy,EVERYBODY would be happy .
I enjoyed the story, great writing skills. You ending could have gone several different ways and I respect your choice. It would have been difficult to take her back, but it's your story. Five stars. CindyTV
I enjoyed the first 90% of the story, but the end just kind of fizzled out for me.
Too irrational. Three stars. As an example, Sam clearly knew who had mutilated him, and would have fingered BOB, had he not been killed.
JPB NOT BOB