by mralx99
There's some confusion about Chapters 01 and 02, but we enjoyed the story (stories?) and hope to see more about the evolving relationships in it (them?)
Definitely 5 stars.
I liked the set up, the emotions, and the normalcy to the setting. It's fun to read about a calm Dom that is controlling others with his (or her) voice. No props or physical control necessary. Everyone knows their place. Please write more.