All Comments on 'Another Roll in the Hay'

Rather long and quite descriptive, as though I walked shoulder to shoulder with your protagonist, Leo. But, if your story surrounds horses and the care of them, please know the difference (my only peeve) between a “mare”, filly, stallion and gelding.

In your descriptions of the “Arabian Mare”, one of the two stabled by your Aunt, you spoke of Sasha and Shadow, each as “him”. Mares are always female. But then, I don’t have to tell you that. Typos happen, especially by a Tank such as myself. But, otherwise , excellent work and looking forward to your nect

Thanks for that, Lee. That bit goes back to the BSB series and was copied from that. Annoying to know it now appears in two stories!

Great story again. Longish which I like and certainly flowed well throughout so no problem in reading it. Yes, there was an issue re the horses but not enough to spoil a good gallop.

Going to bookmark another.

5⛤

Wonderfully involved and complex set of characters and plot lines, all admittedly focused on horses and er... sex. Nice slow burn too, better even than my story offerings on here, but also focussing on the younger male. Looking forward to reading more.

The very best author I have read on here, and I have read a lot