All Comments on 'Answering the Siren's Call'

my god you are wasting your time because you can't write and you can't tell a story this was simply terrible.

My only suggestion is to find an editor. They help alot, and are there to help you become a better writer.

I really enjoyed the story,cant wait to read more!

Agree with the comment that an editor would help with the typos and also possibly help with pacing a bit. The sex dialogue was somewhat corny, but I actually kind of enjoyed it because it was sparse and gave the story an air of realism.

I don't agree with the negative comment at all. I can definitely see room for improvement, but this story has a lot of strong points. The characters are interesting, the sex is hot and well described, and the story holds my interest well. I'm very interested to see what's next for these two.

Drawbacks in the story: Mia and Mac were probably a bit too harsh to poor Zoey, who is about to watch her whole life fall apart. You could have left a bit more tension in Michael and Zoey's story to give yourself something to write about. You are falling into a common trap on the site where everything happens really really easily and two strangers become a 24/7 master/slave pair in less than a month.

Overall well done. Can't wait to read more.

The Mia part was well done, but you made Zoey to be a nasty bitch, and the best thing to do with a nasty bitch is to torch them. A little more of her fall and suffering would have improved the story.v

The right man and woman will son be married! Great Story!

While cheating isn't my fav, I feel that Mac & Mia were kind of justified, by the way they felt for each other and by Zoey's actions at the party. Mac didn't realize he was really in love with Mia and Zoey didn't understand that she was anorexic. I do feel they could have explored that a touch more, but overall it was a great read!!

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Zoey should have turned up at work and been fired for sexual harassment, by the guy that screwed her ass!