by sissy11
Hot story...I loved everything about it, please continue. I really would love to see hubby cucked ;)
As a black male, 26, Canadian, the Mandingo effect is as strong an interracial sex motivator up here as it is down south. Rand. randbinw2@proton.me
BBC mythology and pure bullshit. Go into any locker room, and see it's all bullshit. Men vary in size, length, girth, shape, etc. Regardless of race. Just as many black guys with average, or below average dicks, as larger ones. That's how bell curves work... duh.
So the story concept is good. What i think let you down was the pace and the dialogue. Personally i found the dialogue clumsy in places and the language was not of the time.... in terms of the story pace, to me all just a bit too fast, its the build up the sexual tension that contributes to making something erotic.
I love everything about your story, I find no fault. The power play was spectacular and the confession too. Keep writing more awesome stories I love them.
Excellent story. I enjoyed every second of it. like how is slowly gains control over Delilah and her surrender to him. Inspite of what he says, he clearly does care about her. Yes he owns her but also cares.