All Comments on 'Anticipation...Released'

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Boxlicker101Boxlicker101over 13 years ago
Second Person Present Tense

is not something I usually like. It was hot and good but, if it hadn't been a contest entry, I would have back-clicked.

PrincessErinPrincessErinover 13 years ago
Sexy

Although I don't like first person narratives, this was a sexy story. Good luck in the contest.

LunaEroticaMysticaLunaEroticaMysticaover 13 years ago

What a loving and delightful surprise wrapped in a steamy scene! :)

~LunaEroticaMystica

PS: Love your name!

Mr. E manMr. E manover 13 years ago
mmmm

snesual, erotic, sexy........... love this!!

1sickbastard1sickbastardover 13 years ago
Pay attention guys!

This describes romantic sex at its best.

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