All Comments on '"Any Chance?" Auction Pt. 04'

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lancelot_68lancelot_68over 1 year ago

Great job as usual, even if I saw some "filling" parts, which is obviously fine.

Let see now what happen next.

I'm very very very curious how you can roll the events from the !SOLD! point to next.

Go!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great work as usual. Part 5 in the next day's updates? Clearly, more stories could come from some of the tidbits in this one. Time for the fates of all the women to be revealed. Who was bought by whom? Who's the new cabin boy? Who's going plantation style? Who's going to Shock the Monkey? lol Or Planet of the Apes? Who's feeling foxy? Isabella's flowing red mane would make a great fox for the hunts. Her and church girl probably made quite a sapphic show in their sale(s). Bet she's not going to like it when she figures out her sale is approved. Unless Rosco or Skeeter keep her for themselves? That isn't 'selling' her so the promise made is kept but she wouldn't be a free woman any longer either. I think Elizabeth is going to end up with a ring 'round her neck after the run she thinks she can win. Maybe the 'zoo' owner has a fast monkey girl? I think his daughter probably pictured how Elizabeth looked slave naked, losing the race and her freedom. Who's going to be on the daily menu at a restaurant? The centerpiece display and automatic natural dip dispenser? lol

Maybe instead of selling Anne, they rent her to the other bidders for periods of time? A day? A week? A month? 6 months? A year at a time? Winky winky wrinkled star, the famous Sandy Foot Any Chance Record holder available for rent or lease. lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

So well written from the master of this universe! I bid for more.

roseyfingersroseyfingersover 1 year ago

5 stars. One must continually remind oneself that fiction doesn't have to be plausible and that erotica might even get spice from political and social absurdity. Thanks for explaining the types of fates that await the women who volunteer for this abuse although, once learning of this, it is hard to believe that there are more than a few on earth who would volunteer without any inducement other than to suffer that fate. But very hot and well written.

jackie_emjackie_emover 1 year ago

Isabella definitely needs to be enslaved. While Anne has been humiliated and needs to be further humbled, I'd hope she's not truly enslaved. Perhaps a period of time with effectively being a slave to Skeeter. After the way she teased, taunted and humiliated him, he needs to show her she's not that special. Let Skeeter use her and show her off to his friends slave naked. Given that Anne has that eternity collar, she should be collared for the rest of her life. We definitely need more of this story.

faruefarueover 1 year ago

This is such a nice pre-conclusion of Anne's transformation. A bit overloaded at the end with the presentation of every potential buyer. But this is totally fine. I also like this how you "solved" the story arc of Isabella Calico.

The next chapter will probably the last one which hopefully let this adventure end in an elegant way for our ?former? milionaire.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I would like to see Annie not treated like a normal, anonymous slave girl, but to go her on a tour to humiliate her by her former equals, for example to eat slave food made by her female friends in front of them or suck cocks of her male business partners.

RialbeRialbeover 1 year ago

Anne has managed to talk herself into this situation by being such an arrogant, condescending ass to her family. They are clearly enjoying her comeuppance!

Regardless of the resolution of the “Any Chance” sale, Anne needs to keep her appointment with the blacksmith. Roscoe will certainly approve of a “Big D” on her ass. It’s poetic justice that Anne paid for the custom branding head of Skeeter’s logo that he will use on her. He did say that he prefers “pussy branding,” and Rita will undoubtedly support her son!

reddbunnzreddbunnzover 1 year ago

Do you plan to release more chapters of this story? I understand you have published parts of about 22 total chapters. Where can we find the remainder?

AzotableAzotableover 1 year ago

I have read a thousands of times Master Joe Doe stories. I thought he was retired and, by any chance!!. I found again this masterpiece. In my view: Annie deserves the lesson but not to be slave forever. Looking forward the next chapter!

Joe_Doe_StoriesJoe_Doe_Storiesover 1 year agoAuthor

I'm editing the next chapter now. Thank you to everyone for the kind feedback, and I hope to get the next chapter submitted in January. :-)

RedrossesRedrossesover 1 year ago

Looking forward to the next part - I’m a little in love with Annie but want to learn of her branding whipping and ultimate pleasure- then her release to her previous life

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

My theory on what happens next: Rita used the broad power of attorney to transfer her "sisters" money to her account. The final bid was made by Rita. Annie will continue to be humbled by her newly wealthy older "sister" as their families newly acquired slave. She will no longer be able to tease Roscoe and skeeter and will get to live out here slave girl fantasy in a loving home, but will never be set free.

AzotableAzotableover 1 year ago

Hi Master Joe. Please…we cannot wait more for the final chapter!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

When will we get next chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Is this story going to continue? 🤔

Joe_Doe_StoriesJoe_Doe_Storiesabout 1 year agoAuthor

A new chapter has been submitted. Thank you for your patience! :-)

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