All Comments on '"Any Chance?" Auction Pt. 08'

Starting with Page 4, page 1-4 appears to be repeated.

I'd forgotten about this story. Umm, you doubled up a couple times repeating story sections. The end left a little room for hopefully future stories from her monopoly slave auction house/distribution network. Shame there couldn't have been more adventures involving slave Annie and some of the other characters in their domains before ending up recovered and conceiving her own slave pussy monopoly. Anna Annie's Pleasure Pussies? She even copyrights & trademarks the skeeter design as her corporate brand. The "Slave Skeeter" could be used as a endless poke at her nephew but it serves a much better advertising function. "Only the best slave girls at Anna Annie's Pleasure Pussies. Look for the Slave Skeeter brand to know a slave has been bitten and craves to have her new owner scratch her itch."

You need to edit this story. It repeated parts of the story.

Joe, is there an editing error here - it looks like most of the chapter got duplicated word for word?

It is possible that not quite all the new slave girls will have as pleasant and carefree an experience as slave Annie had. But then, that'll be educational for them too, so it really is a win-win scheme, isn't it?

Outstanding! Completes the story but leaves room for further adventures if desired. Nice job. My favorite so far.

there is a lot of good stuff here but it seems that there are also some cut and paste errors.

I absolutely love your stories and I have read this series several times. The first couple pages in the final chapter were good then it wasn't thanks for the story anyway.

Story is titillating. However, it's the second one I've noticed in the last week to have major sections repeated. Is this a Literotica glitch?

You lose a star for the duplication, suggest you withdraw and repost.

Love the mind fuck Merle gives the women!

Not happy about the duplicate, was hoping the story was as long as the page count made it look like!

Lot of paste problems, but the story is awsome.

Please, when you've time, just edit and correct.

Thank you so much for bringing this series to a conclusion - I loved the ending, especially the way she turned the tables on Skeeter (although I think she should have locked him in chastity, or even make him go through the Any Chance himself). The characters are so engaging that I really wanted to find out what would happen with them, and the sex scenes are smoking hot: nobody else does humiliation and anticipation quite as well as you. Please continue writing in this universe.

good story as usual, but it should be put back in the right order

good story as usual, but it should be put back in the right order

I liked the ending. Thinking Annie would wind up a slave with Rita going huge profit seemed off. I am glad she made lemonade from what could have been a destructive experience. Skeeter got a quick re education on what it is like on the other side. That was my favorite part.

Sorry about the duplication of your text. It was a real distraction but more so I felt robbed of probably an additional 4 pages of your work

Compared to full story this last chapter seemed lackluster. Maybe enjoying a passionate session with Skeeter or something like this would make it much more exciting

Well done and well played. 5 stars the whole way with great storytelling and fun and entertaining characters all and all top shelf entertainment. Cheers

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I really hope one day you could make an alternative ending where Rita went through with selling Anne, would be amazing. But this was still a good ending nonetheless, thank you for writing.

I have read tons of stories on here over the years, but this by far is the best written. Although lengthy, the amount of detail and description is outstanding. I really enjoyed the whole thing. There is something wrong with Part 8 page 4. Excerpts from earlier part of the story have somehow been interjected in pages 4 thru 8. Otherwise, excellent.

Good story with lots of turns. Some of them were frustrating until poetic license is applied. Saved this in favorites!

Please finish your slave yoga series!