All Comments on 'Any Chance We Could Ch. 04'

by Reindeer58

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 15 years ago
I like the way you think

Talk about your best fantasy. I think I've just read mine. It couldn't get any better than to have three wet pussies all for the taking. He should have fucked that sexy daughter of his though.Thanks for the mind fuck....Rich

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
size

I was enjoying the story till i got to the fourteen inch dick.i wonder sometime if authors think us men are dumb enough to believe this shit......(i am a doctor also)....

I didnt finish reading after that comment

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Hot

can't wait till he gets all three lovly women in bed

tracysatintracysatinover 15 years ago
So erotic.

This series was so erotic, please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Stunningly crafted

Again a masterpiece in the making. Very few errors that I noted while perusing the overall text. Am sorry that the Anon from Australia didn't think to read the earlier chapters to find out the 14 inches was a joke, because they missed out on a great story. Can't wait for Scott to get all three lovely ladies together, as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
damn good story

nice story... cant wait to read the rest!

mBrowmBrowover 15 years ago
Nice, hot story

This is quite a fun read, but yes, we do have to suspend reality to absorb it. The characters are a bit too perfect. Scott could do '007' work, it seems! But yes, it's fantasy, and we accept the exaggeration. Also, the writing is technically superior, so we appreciate the skill and review efforts!

oldefferoldefferover 15 years ago
14 Inch Cock was Funny

The Australian doctor (yeah, right) doesn't seem to understand humor. Mine is 20 inches (yeah, right!)

sqheadgermansqheadgermanover 11 years ago
I will go with the flow

Yes, i think on a woman a shave pussy looks like a 10 yr. old. Some hair should be there, but, not like a bush. Sheer on undies are ok, if over 18 not younger... DATE RAPE never. use a rubber do not get STD. The female rules, if she says NO that is it. NO means NO. period... sqhead

papabear555papabear555over 11 years ago
Love ur humor

This is one of the funniest stories I read on this site. Thank goodness I live alone. My laughing would be getting too much attention. For the critics, remember it's a story. In the same catagory as Cinderella. Fantasy! But it's still a good story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Why is okay spelled ok and capital?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Unbelievable balance of story and naughty

Reading it again and again. ʝ.

wagonet2wagonet2about 4 years ago
oh yes

where we are going seems obvious but author makes the journey very nice

namidaboshinamidaboshiabout 2 years ago

All the hairy pussy talk is kinda killing the vibe. Sad.

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