by Simplton
very nice so far your HEADED towards a ten after i read the rest i let you know in the END if you made it here, its awesome so far though
great so far--just wish you could have had the couple sneak in a few quick fucks before the payoff scene..maybe you can still work it in somewhere--good so far
Although this is a Ch.07 it is the first I have read about Anya. I found it a great story, beautifully told. I especially like teenage girl/sister action, with the man close by. I place myself in the young man's position. I rated it 100/100.
they are great realistic and very sexy entertainment.