by fsqueeze
At first, I thought the plot line was really pretty silly--unbelievable even in a fantasy story. However, moving toward the end as she understood Mark's feelings, it turned out a lot better than I thought. Your vivid descriptions and development of Mrs. Titball made it seem like she was standing right in front of me...lol. Thanks for a good read from a really "crazy" start....lol.
this was fantastic o i loved it if he is in collage now sure has his own car an long weekends they can even pracyice cooking bakeing lemon barx lol it was very erotic an loveing hope to read more
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I sure hope there is more to come of this story. You got a great chance to keep it going
Great story and humorous writing.
She's gotta give him her butt.
It's funny how certain aspects of our intimacy partners bodies can become obsessions for us, especially when we didn't see it coming.
Chapter 1 he's obsessed with her huge breasts, only to see her in all her glory and become fixated on a whole different part of her sexual form. Hot glances and lustful looks that key her into his leanings. But his shyness makes it difficult for him to voice it out loud, until she gets so frustrated by it that she takes charge.
Very nice! Nothing like your first time with an older woman who knows her stuff.
Fantastic story. Very wholesome. Wish it was a longer story, but nevertheless a very fun read. 5 stars