by SimonDoom
Too bad your story wasn't in the contest, It might have won. I, for one, enjoyed it. Five Stars ~~ JBE
PS: One thing, though: Duke? Really? Well, it takes all kinds.
We always hear that realtors will do anything to make the sale. She is single. She is hot. He is attractive. She gets laid. She gets the sale. Great story. Very hot. *****
Clever. Different from anything else I've read on the site. Bonus: I always learn a new use for a word or turn of phrase from reading Simon's work. I love good writing,
I fucking love this story. Fun, sexy, creative, and well written! Fantastic! This is an immediate fav.
It appears I have read more of your stories at an earlier time, but forgot the details. Whether a first or second read, I thoroughly enjoyed the excitement as it built up and up.
I really enjoyed this story until the last few sentences. They half ruined it for me. 4 stars.
Bill S.
Fun story. Had me wanting to be her.
But “Victor Maxon?” I chuckled.
And when he said, “…And please call me Victor…” I mentally substituted, “And please call me Victor Maxon.” God, i wish you’d done that. I’d have died laughting…
Anyways, great stuff!