All Comments on 'Anything for You Ch. 01'

"What the fuck just happened?" Kind of a foolish question. Raelynn just found out her brother had a thing for her, that's what happened. And it turned her on. That's also what happened. He man, she woman - what is more natural than one or both feeling drawn to the other. The man made obstacles of genetics and law may stand in the way, but they have nothing to do with the reality of emotion. I hope we'll see which wins out.

Like to see where this goes. Thanks

Make this a complete story!

OMG please finish the story

but please not end wae way way to short.please continue ASAP

Another so called author who starts a story and never finishes it. So bloody frustrating

Wonderful preparatory session for that which is yet to come. Your characters are identified, bsckground established and setting outlined.

Please disregard most of the previous comments. Writer understand, slackers just want a fan scenario. The length is ideal, your speed of information perfect. Better to have multiple submissions, which allows others to join/follow than a lengthy one-off.