by markydaysaid
It's very refreshing to see such a brunt and brutal portrayal of the traditional submission genre. I love how the female characters are brutally honest with their intentions, yet with enough subtlety that the male still has his doubts and decides to along with it, at least until the inevitable climax. The addition of not just the girlfriend, but also the girlfriend's mother, her ex-boyfriend and even the man's own family are nice touches that really amplify the eager anxiousness on the part of the reader for the story to reach its pinnacle, where he'll undoubtedly be humiliated by multiple characters that are important to his security and social structure in a traditional society.
In other words, the ultimate betrayal, not just by his significant other, but by everyone, including his former childhood friend, her family, and his family.
That's just plain hot.
I also love the subtle and underlying clues to the story's true nature you decide to slip in (LOLITA kwon, for instance). The dark humor is great!
PLEASE CONTINUE!
Is our boy a sissy cock sucker? Bet he gets his ass/pussy broke in on the ship. Still think he would be better off in chastity. And once he get a good load of cum in his belly, he will be ready for his sissy training. Maybe turned into a hot sexy lady boy.