by markydaysaid
The enlargement of the cruise ship's world and its characters was nice, though the less-intense focus on the family means the story loses some of its intimacy and taboo with the main characters.
I liked the end scene especially.
plz, if ur writing a new chapter let him catch a break. seems too nice of a guy to get all this crap thrown his way
They should make a hentai anime from this script. It would sell like a fucking boss.
I want to read where the cuckold boyfriend gets a good pussy fucking and breeding as his girl friend watches. As he sucks on another cock and swallows that load. As he shoots his own load out of his chastity cock. The cuckold needs to be used like the slut bitch his girl friend is.