All Comments on 'Apocalypse Slaves Pt. 03'

Groups at war, payback, constant retribution. Dicks in charge of the world OH wait we always have been, how long can Adam keep it up.!

I like the new direction, probably more trouble than fighting to keep the peace.

Other groups are doing the same thing, there is always some one bigger, smarter, tougher. Like Negen, I'm not on to the new season yet, but some one got a beat down from Ricks group.

Well hello there, I really enjoy this series

I wonder what you'll put up next, though i would find it amusing if there were a group of women raiders just for The change of story, i'd like to See how you handle that. No pressure 😜

Keep up The good work ;)

@ Maddict: thanks! To be compared to The Walking Dead in such a way is high praise indeed!

@ VeeryB: hm, never really gave that concept much thought to be honest. I'll definitely will keep it in mind and not discount the possibility. I could defiantly see a group of women raiders out and about. We'll see where the writing takes us!

As always: thanks for reading and for the feedback! :)

When are you going to finish the creature below, the snow maiden, and vampiress mine I hope it's soon because I really like this story line.i really want to finish reading this story line I'm a fan of it.

Whose baby is it??!!

When I originally wrote this one, I left it up to the reader to decide for themselves. But, since I’m starting to come back to the Colorado Coalition as of Part 10 of this series, I might revisit this little tidbit of information. We’ll see. ;)

While each of the stories does need a different feel to them, this one was definitely less satisfying. From the sharing of his slave immediately after receiving her (from the reader's perspective), to the lack of willingness to fight, to the threat of killing Adam instead of Walker concerned with the ritualistic suicide, this chapter felt more like trope while the others felt genuine. Also, the cliff hanger didn't add anything to the story. Thanks for sharing this with us. 4 starts

Agree. This was a less satisfying read than the previous ones. But still a good continuation of the story line.