by The_Darkness
With such short chapters, it will be hard to remember the early chapters and to keep up with the story. I think the best thing to do is wait until the whole story is posted and then read it at the readers leisure. It's a good story, but I think that it will get lost in the shuffle. Thanks......Rich
Please write more chapters to this story. They have all been great. The only possible way I can think of to improve this story is to make them longer.