All Comments on 'Apples & Oranges'

You are the one who said it.

Ridiculous fantasy.

What were the very first words of this entry? "Author's note: This vacuous stroker is total fiction except for places." Hey, "vacuous stroker" means "absurd fantasy" and "total fiction" means it's made-up crud. Of COURSE it's jerkoff-bait pandering to horny guys reading this one-handed. If you don't like such, why are you here?

Loved it! It's like you saw what was in my head and then wrote it down.

Overwritten to the point of it being painful reading.

all I will say like the other one is that it was written well

I eagerly await your version with the over-written parts edited out.