All Comments on 'Applying the Lesson Pt. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
One question

It was alluded to, but not explored that I saw, did the professor frame his ex with the SEC charges?

tkh3nkey2110tkh3nkey2110about 5 years ago
Why was this story high-lited with an "H"?

Nuff said?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Interesting, complicated, almost believable story

Couple of comments. Past tense of “rid” is “rid.”

Stuck in a small town that has only a small motel and a … Walmart?

Schwanze1Schwanze1over 4 years ago
That was

Both touching and hilarious. Well done

inka2222inka2222over 2 years ago

I would give 5 stars for great story, but I'm rather annoyed by the pretty boy's constant whining about how awfully hard it is to be desired by women. #niceproblemtohave. So, only 3 stars.

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanover 1 year ago

thanks for the effort of writing the series. Only part 1 and 2 are any good, unless I am missing the "sarcasm" or whatever this is.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellent story - nice character byplay. Not a fan of going back and forth with narration

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