All Comments on 'Appointment for Spanking'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Really loved it.

I would be great if the next part will contain more detailed information about the spanking and perhaps even involve some more intense humiliating situations with housemate.

Overall, I loved the concept, I like the writing and I would be thrilled to see this continue. 5 stars!

Artman4Artman4about 8 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thank you for your feedback. The next instalment is pending and the 3rd instalment is in my head, waiting to be written!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Hot Spanking Scene

I love the story concept, very hot. Would help to hear how the spankee felt while naked over the lap, was he getting turned on, did he feel fingers touching sensitive places? How does the horny old gentleman feel about the spankee? Great start, look forward to reading more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great concept, but....

...use of quotation marks and proper punctuation to denote conversation would greatly enhance the story. Greater detail as noted in other comments would also add to the story.

cdbeatnikcdbeatnikabout 8 years ago
Just what I need

I have made contact and then chickened out at the last moment from being spanked by an older gentleman very similar to Mr. B...

I like the way the story developed and the fellow had to wait naked in the housekeepers presence.

I wonder what kind of trouble he would be in had he cancelled out as many times as I have prior to actually going thru with it?

Please continue...

nudemale4straponnudemale4straponover 6 years ago
Great spanking story

Love the pace of this story and the focus on just spanking on the first chapter. Great play also of CMNM Aabnd CFNM. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Visit for a spanking

I visit a gentlemen for spankings he plays the role of daddy.he puts me in a very boyish school uniform..and does not hesitate in pulling my shorts and underwear down for a good bare bottom handspanking.. l also have to be in my pjs by 0630pm and l am put to bed at 0730pm just like a little boy.and daddy always gives me a good bare bottom spanking be fore he puts me to bed just so l know my place

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

nice but I would love a sequei

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I would love to be spanked like that

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

i need him to spank me. i need to suck his cock.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great job

My email address is gerald.johnson0602@gmail.com

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