by bigpapabare
I don't like to be teased if it does not eventually result in a good payoff.
To give him a taste for a day or two and then cut him off. This game could be played for a long time without any harm. Yes, I realize that it is just a story.
What a sadistic thing to do,what about at least a detailed account of the warranty time.
A first class story,very erotic,the commentator who mentioned the various .... etc. in the text,try reading this as if it was a script for a play,then you will see the significance of these pauses and sexual vocal points.
A lot can happen in 26HRS,perhaps enough for you to add a chapter or two in this excellent series.You can also get extended warranties you know?
Very nicely put together bigpapabare. I loved the oral training sessions.
I have just finished all three parts and it was very well done. Thank you so much for writing it. It does give me ideas.
Story might be decently done. But seriously some edit work could greatly improve how easily it is read. There is extrememly too much use of ... for which 99.999% can be removed, and things like nnnnnnnoooooooooooowwwwwwww for emotions when a better option is NOW, does the same.