All Comments on 'Apprehended Ch. 12'

The story kinda feels repetitive now. I mean after 12 chapters, I find Annie to be completely naive and clueless. Might stick for now just to know what the ending will be.

Thank you so much for continuing! Very interested in the other story you had mentioned possibly posting! Youre a fantastic writer cant wait to see what happens next! Ethan is amazing!!! ;)

I enjoy the story. You write well and the concept is solid... but we're in ch12 with 1 oral sex scene and some kissing. It may help to do longer chapters or to pick up the pace... They both almost died and still no action?

She has been beaten down and lives in fear but i'm looking forward to seeing her true self emerge.

I see some people complaining that theres not enough action between Annie and Ethan, but I love a slow burn. It makes all their interactions that much more intense. There are plenty of stories on this website full of sex if that's what some readers want.

Love the story, can't wait to see what happens!

I'm really liking the story. Are you going to finish it. I really hope you do.

Are you gonna update another part of this story or what? Slow burn with an even slower updates is such a pain in the ass. Hope you are doing well and will get to see the series finished :/