All Comments on 'Apprehended Ch. 31'

It feels like this story is a bit rudderless. how many versions of going outside and something bad happening can there be?

Just glad to see the next chapter. Well done.

I'm happy to see an update. However, I feel that so much time is spent building an ominous feeling and very little time is spent moving the story forward. Yes, they are bad luck and bad choice magnets... everything in the entire supernatural world is out to get them. Doom, gloom... we get it. There has to be something to move beyond that. There are loads of loose ends to tie up, not to mention what we actually want to read about- some happiness and respite for these poor girls.

I discovered the first chapter of this story yesterday, and have found the characters so endearing that I barely slept keep reading and now I’m up to date! Thank you so much for taking the time to write this!

I hope you updste this wonderful story soon.

More please!

Thank you for keeping coming back to add to this story. It's wonderful.

i always enjoyed this story, i hope you conrinue it and they ALL have a plesant long happy life together

I have so enjoyed reading your story, seeing how the characters develop, watching the love and trust grow between Ethan and Annie. It has been so long since you’ve posted a new chapter, and I truly hope that you haven’t given up on these fascinating beings. I’m so looking forward to your next chapters, and would love to see them soon!

❤️