All Comments on 'April and Her Friends Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Is this a hotel pool or a ship pool?

First he's rescuing her from a hotel pool, then suddenly the ship's doctor gets involved. So where is this happening?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Too quick to do anal

Hardly a brand new deflowered virgin opts to do anal the first time. I notice this trend in your other stories. It’s yours to do what you wish and I know it’s fantasy but be more realistic. X

jcus0511jcus0511almost 3 years ago

Really enjoyable fantasy. I’ll let ride the couple of editing mistakes with words left out and the reference to being a ship in order to just enjoy the lust and joy of sex that this story has started out with and so I am ooking forward to following up the remaining chapters.

roveroneroveroneabout 1 year ago

quite a payback! both her 18 yo cherries...!

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Hi! I'm Kathryn M. Burke. I've written about a dozen novels of love and sex, all published on Amazon (print and ebook). I'm really into unconventional relationships--polygamy, polyamory, intergenerational sex, etc. But I like to tell stories of people's feelings, not just thei...

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